Thursday, 30 May 2013

Book Talk Question # 4


If you could change one thing about this book, what would it be
and why? First explain the part in detail. Then describe why you would want
to change the part. Finally, show what you would do differently.

If you enjoyed the book, and don’t want to change anything, which part of
the book would you like to expand? Maybe you want to know more about a
relationship between two characters, or maybe you want to know more about a
scene. Make sure you include why you wanted to know more.

5 comments:

  1. If I was able to change this book I would change the farmers.If i was able to i would change the farmersso they would offer the fox and his family and I would change the fox and his family to make them wait till the farmers offer them food insted of stealing the food from the farmers.

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  2. ne part of the book I would expand would be in chapter 2 when the book is talking about Mr.Fox the book should talk about Mr.Fox's family like his wife and his children. The book should talk about Mr.Fox's family more because the book never really talks about Mr.Fox's family.

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  3. i like this book a lot. There's not much that I would want to change. if I could expand a part in the book it would be when Mr. Fox is stealing from all the farmers. I'd like to hear more about how he got around so quickly and quietly. I'd also like to hear about what the farmers were thinking. It tells about what they do and say but it doesn't tell much about what they're thinking, both about the fox and their lives.

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  4. I wouldn't really want to change the book, its quite amazing to me already. But in the end of the book, it doesn't really tell anything more about the farmers. It seems like the author just quit on the book. It just says how the farmers are waiting and it doesn't really tell what will happened to the farmers or the family in the future. It would be nice if he added more detail on that part. But more than that, it was a cool and funny book to read.

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  5. of I got to change one part I would change the farmers and where they shoot the tail off of the fox and I wish they shot and missed the fox and shot the tree stump and now they are moving because of the farmers and the guns.And the dady fox is tail-iess now and one of the little foxs said "you might grow it back"and that is the part that they move.

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